You like my poem? It’s good?
Question by Channy: You like my poem? It’s good?
I wrote it about nature for LA homework. I am deaf and don’t know poems much, But I love to write poems! I hope it’s good rhyme! 
Believe in flowers
Lots flowers are faith and feelings
They inside deep sleepy souls as voices
Millions of lightness color and touch much soft
They listen low-deep voices breaks weakly as eyes
Flower’s petals feels fuzzy and soft as lost
Believe in flowers
Best answer:
Answer by Amanda
I think that that was a great poem! 
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I thought it sounded a bit weird but other than that it was good!
L1- Lots of flowers among faith and feelings,
L2- They’re inside, deep sleepy souls as voices,
L3- Millions of lightness’s, colors of`touch, much softness-
L4- They listen, low-deep voices, break weakly, as eyes
L5- Flower petals feel fuzzy, soft, although lost
L6- Believe in fragrance
k, even if your def its good to read loud hear with in right?
sorry I have def friends they are encouraged to talk and reading a loud to yourself a poem would be good, no ones gonna hear you? And so what if they do.
there is two kinds of rhyme
feel- steel- peel- reel- heel
real- steal- heal
then to you might want to take the meaning in?
sometimes ppl want to correct me?
but my words I mean I want them to heel, not heal.
Which means poets are also versed in definitions of words.